Friday, 12 October 2012

Treatment - Draft 2


‘The Gangs’

Vixen, Vassy and violin. (Rude girls)

Buster, Box and Basher (Rude boys)

Dianna, Kathleen, Noreen Elizabeth Victoria Francesca Mary Anne Catherine Jill the 7th and Yolanda (DKNY)

Act one: It’s early afternoon and most other teenagers are at school however, Vixen, Vassy and Violin are doing their usual bunking off of school in the estate park. They all attempt to introduce themselves at the same time which causes a small and petty argument between the girls as Vixen believes she should talk first because as she puts it, she’s the ‘’Boss.’’ Eventually, all the girls introduce themselves and get back to doing what they were doing before and as you can guess, that was absolutely nothing! But trouble is never far away from these girls and just as we start to think that the group of girls isn’t so bad, the girls’ enemies walk round the corner ‘’The Rude Boys.’’ Before, we know it both groups are shouting abuse at each other.  While this is going on unknown to their ‘’Gangs’’ Violin and Box keep quiet and proceed to lock eyes with each other…

Act Two: Dianna, Kathleen, Noreen Elizabeth Victoria Francesca Mary Anne Catherine Jill the 7th and Yolanda who are all members of the ‘DKNY’ gang introduce themselves in an over the top manner. They are continually smiling, blowing kisses and making eye contact with the cameras…
Act Three: The next day, just as Violin shuts her front door behind her Box walks past. As soon as Violin sees Box and they make eye contact she averts her eyes rapidly and tries to quickly get back inside her house. She tries to get back inside a little too enthusiastically but forgets that she shut the front door moments before and ends up slamming head firsts straight into the door. Box runs up and helps her and they end up walking to school together. Once they get to the school gates the quickly part ways after swapping numbers because if any of their friend see them together then all hell would break lose.

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