Radio edit

Radio edit. by Lauren-M

This is my Radio Edit;
To achieve this I chose the voices that I wanted (three girls) and then I edited that so that all the mistakes were taken away and they sound was right and it flowed naturally. Then I chose the music to play with it and then I made that go with the voices that you could hear the voices at some parts and the you can hear the music at some points to achieve that I split the voices so that at the beginning the music played louder then after 5/10 seconds it quietened down to play in the background to the voices and then after the first part of the voices it played louder and then went quieter again to play the second part of the music.
I think I'm proberly a high Pass or Low Merit.

MoodBoard- travelling men and women aged 18-25 (Content)

This is my mood board for travelling men and women aged 18-25. I chose most of these pictures because I think that they all symbolise things that people around that age might want to do whether they have alot of money all not.
Men and women around that age are either still studying or just finished their schooling and may or may not have alot of money after paying to go to college or university so I decided to have a choice for both. I they don't exactly have alot of money on the left hand side I have holidays for people to go and do if they don't have alot of money left for instance camping, cycling, volunteering, caravaning, world travelling or even canoeing.
However on the other side (right) I have placed holidays that men and women with quite alot of money left other might want to do for instance going to countries such Ibiza and Magaluf, or beach holidays staying at an hotel or villa, skiing holidays, travelling aeround the world to more exotic countries or spa holidays.

Mood Board - Travelling/holidays for men and women aged 18-25 (Audience)

This is my mood board for travelling/holidays for men and women aged 18-25.
I added these images to my mood board because I think they all symbolise something to do with that age group and gender. On the left hand side is the side I added pictures for women and on the right I added pictures symbolising men at that age.
*I added the makeup because girls all mostly like make up from teens.
*I added the books (maths, english and history) to show that they might be students or just finishing their schooling.
*The picture of the group of girls is to symbolise that girls around that age like to go out with friends and do things
*The picture of the newspaper with the job sign in the middle is to symbolise that they might be getting jobs or just starting a new job.
*The picture of the magazines are to show that girls around that age are sometimes into fashion and celebrity gossip.
*The blackberry is to show that girls around that age normally have blackberries and also they like to keep in touch and one of the ways many people do that is through Blackberry Messanger, ect...
On the other side I added pictures to symbolise men around that age
*I added the Top Gear sign to show that men are into cars and may be starting their driving tests at that time or buying their first car, the picture is also to show that men like shows that have things to do with cars,ect...
*I added the football because men like to play/watch football and many men want to be professional football players.
*I added the Fifa game because most men like to play them sort of games, mostly games to do with fighting, shooting, stabbing and football, I mostly added it for the same reason as the football.
*I added the picture of the man/boy studying because like the picture of the books before the men and women at this age might be still at school or just finishing their schooling.
*I added the picture of the beer because men and women can officially legally start drinking at that age and also men are more known to drink beer and like alchol.
*I added the Iphone because men are into tecnology and most men like to have the best parts of tecnology.
*I added the picture of the boy around all the tecnology for the same reason as the Iphone.
*And I added the PlayStation 3 for the same reason as the Fifa game.

Mood Board - Childrens Tv

This is my childrens tv mood board to complete this I had to open a publisher document and then I searched on the internet independently ''Childrens Tv'' then once I had an idea for my theme which was Cbeebies I then searched ''Cbeebies characters'' to which a lot of pictures of characters came up and I then realised that a theme colour could be blue because of the cbeebies name actualy had an blue background which I used for my background with Cbeebies in the middle, I then placed the little yellow blobs all around the page as cbeebies use them alot and its an easy way to recognise that the mood board is about cbeebies. After that I got some light blue sploges and placed them around the page to which I placed the character pictures on top of.

Evaluation Skills Powerpoint.

Skills Evaluation

Skills Evalutation:

1)   Explain what skills you developed by doing all of the tasks?

Kanye west:

Masking – I developed this skill because before I never knew anything about masking now I feel as if I can do it confidently and independently. To achieve this I had to make sure that my masking was neat, tidy and professional.

Rulers- I developed this skill because like masking before I never knew anything about rulers and didn’t know how to use them and what they was for, now I can use them confidently and am able to teach others how to do it as well. To achieve this I had to make sure I used the rulers affectively to make sure that my work was aligned and looked professional and neat.

Masthead- I developed this skill because I could do it before but now I feel as though I can do it confidently and I now know tips to make sure that it looks professional like for instance not to use to many colours and fonts and the colours to look professional should match something that the celebrity or person has on them or is wearing.

Nicki Minaj:

Magic Wand- I developed this skill because before I never knew how to use this tool but now I realise this it is quite an important tool to make your work look professional and clean cut so it looks like it hasn’t been masked.

Coverlines- I developed this skill because like with the masthead I knew how to do it but I couldn’t do it professionally and properly couldn’t teach someone else how to do it however now I feel confident doing it and know tips of how to make it look professional like keeping it all aligned with the other coverlines, ect...

Rihanna:

Backgrounds- I developed this skill because before even though I could do it I properly would’ve just chose any colour and it wouldn’t have looked like something you would see in a real magazine now I feel as though I can do it effectively and choose colours that I think would bring out the picture and make the work look professional.

Changing the colour of the picture- I developed this skill because I can know change the colour of the actual picture to which before I couldn’t do, for example with the Rihanna picture we changed the colour of the picture to black and white.

2)  Which tasks did you enjoy the most? Why?

The tasks that I enjoyed the most was most properly the planning for video task script writing Bus stop and crazy taxi driver, I enjoyed this task because I like writing and the task was quite relaxing and calm because we could do whatever we wanted in the story. It was also quite an easy task but still had some difficulties like with the tab button to make the writing go along the page sort of messed up on my script but was eventually sorted out.

I also enjoyed doing the fashion montage because we could pick the pictures of the clothes that we liked and we could pick the frames and lay them out on the page where ever we wanted, I think I enjoyed this task a lot because there was no set layout it could be however we wanted it to be and we could have whatever text we wanted and whatever colour we liked.

3)  What skills are you best at?

I think the skills that I am best at are masking images because I got to have a lot of practise and eventually started to find it easy.

Another skill that I think I am good at are writing scripts because I got used to all the rules and eventually like masking images started to find them easy and really enjoyed the task.

4)  How do you think you could use your skills in future on the course?

I think I could use the skills in the future of the task because if we ever did any of the tasks again for example script writing or masking  I could help other people who don’t understand the task or need some help.

5)  What skills do you need to get better at?

I think I could get better at using the magic wand because even though I know how to use it well I still think that I need some more practise on how to use it perfectly.

Another skill I think I could get better at is changing the colour of coverlines I know how to do it but on the Three column layout task Ihad some trouble changing the colour of the box to which I had to leave it blank.

6)  What could you do to get better at those skills?

To get better at those skills I think I could for the magic wand ask someone around me to help me or Sir to see if they can explain it to me, I could also search online to see if there’s any walkthroughs for me to watch to see if I would then understand it but if I still didn’t I could try it again for myself like start a whole new document and practise until I eventually get it and If I still didn’t understand it after that I could attend Media club after school on certain days

7)  Powerpoint.

StoryBoard Taxi Ride.

This is my Storyboard from my script about The Taxi Driver. (Sorry about the bad drawing) To achieve this I had to draw the picture of what I wanted to see then I had to draw black or white arrows depending on the camera movements or normal movements. Then I had to add text to the side of the picture to show whether it was outside or inside (EXT OR INT) where it is (shops, cafe, school, ect..) and what time of day it was (Late afternoon or morning). I also said what time of shot it was for example if it was a extreme close up or walking room shot then I said what camera movements if there is one and I include any other information that I think is needed.

Boyfriend Cheating (FINISHED)

Ext.Bus stop.Morning.

CHARLEY sits at the bus stop and watches the cars go by. BILLIE sits down beside her and sighs before beginning to talk.

              BILLIE

          You know were really close friends and...

    

              CHARLEY

          And...

             

              BILLIE

Well... Okay... Let’s say you know something about someone and that someone happens to be        something very important to one of your best friends,what would you do would you tell the        person and risk breaking their heart or would you keep quiet and hope the situation dies          down and goes away...

CHARLEY looks at BILLIE confusingly but still doesn’t get what BILLIE is trying to say.

              CHARLEY

          BILLIE are you trying to tell me something?

              BILLIE

          No, well ermmm... No.

CHARLEY looks at BILLIE suspiciously.

              CHARLEY

          You know you can tell me if there is?

BILLIE thinks about things for a minute before beginning to talk.

              BILLIE

You know at the party yesterday when you feel asleep on the sofa...?

              CHARLEY

          Yeah...

              BILLIE

Well, I was drunk and this other person was drunk and Well we started talking and kissed.....

CHARLEY smiled not realising what she means by this.

              CHARLEY

          Awww BILL, who's the mystery guy?

BILLIE looks to the floor.

              BILLIE

Well I truly didn’t realise who I was talking to until after it had happened and you know I would never do anything like this, it was purely because I was drunk. Promise you won’t get angry promise.

CHARLEY frowns, starting to put two and two toghether and stares straight into BILLIES EYES

              CHARLEY

          Spit it out, who was it.

              BILLIE

          It was...

BILLIE looks to the floor and tears start to fall down her face.

              BILLIE

          It was... BOB.

CHARLEY looks at BILLIE and slaps her straight across the face.

              CHARLEY

You...YOU traitor! I thought we were friends but all along you have been behind my back going out with my boyfriend! Whats wrong can’t find a boyfriend for yourself so you have to take mine!

BILLIE holding her face from the shock of the slap.

              BILLIE

It was never like that CHARLEY, it wasn't intended. It just sorta happened, trust me.

              CHARLEY

I will never trust you ever, ever again! Friend! pfft! You will never be no friend of mine!

CHARLEY takes out her phone and begins to dial an number.

              BILLIE

          Who are you calling?!?

              CHARLEY

Not that it’s any of your business, but I’m calling BOB. I think it’s time we see what        really happened that night, when you and him went behind my back...and to think I ever         trusted you, to think I used to trust you with everything and used to call you my BESTFRIEND!

CHARLEY begins to talk on phone.

              CHARLEY

Hello, we need to talk, now! Can we meet? No, this needs to be sorted now! No not on the phone! Ok... Hurry, bye.

BILLIE stares at CHARLEY.

              CHARLEY

          What are you looking at, come with me!

              BILLIE

          Where are we going?!?

CHARLEY ignores BILLIE.

              BILLIE

          I said where are we going?!?

CHARLEY continues to ignore BILLIE and sticks her hand out for the bus.

EXT.Park.Morning.

CHARLEY looks around before seeing BOB sitting on a bench in an empty side of the park.

                                    CHARLEY

                        Come, now.

CHARLEY and BILLIE walk towards BOB.

              BOB

          Hey girls, how can I be of assistance?

BILLIE looks down.

              CHARLEY

Oh, I just thought that you wanted to have a chat with your girlfriend...

BOB signals for CHARLEY to come and sit with him.

              CHARLEY

          Not me... Her.

CHARLEY pushes BILLIE down to sit with BOB.

              CHARLEY

          Oh look what an happy couple.

BOB looks at CHARLEY confusingly.

              BOB

What are you on about CHARLEY, your my girlfriend! You know that, what makes you think that she’s my girlfriend!?

BILLIE gives BOB an evil glance.

              BILLIE

          Actually the girl your calling SHE has a name!

              CHARLEY

Shut up, both of you! I know your little secret from the party! How could you do this to me BOB! I thought you loved me!

              BOB

CHARLEY you know it was never supposed to happen it was an drunken moment, an accident! I love you CHARLEY and wouldn’t ever do this to you! It just happened CHAR believe me.

              CHARLEY

How could I ever believe you again! You cheated on me with my bestfriend! How could you BOB I thought you loved me, what was I never good enough for you?!? Did you just want me to get to her! Tell me! I would've changed for you! Because we was soul mates...

              BILLIE

          I told you before..

              CHARLEY

          Shut it! You tramp!

              BOB

          Char... babe...

              CHARLEY

          Don't ever call me that... Again!

              BOB

Okay, okay calm down ba... I mean Char you know I love you and always will look this was an druken mistake thats escalated into something stupid, if I could turn back time you know I would! I would do anything to be with you... Char..

              CHARLEY

Oh... I loved you, now I see sense you mean nothing to me now and now thinking of it, I need to protect other girls and boys for that creature of there from you doing that to them! I think I need to do my bit by protecting them from yous!

              BILLIE

Char, I mean CHARLIE what are you on about? BOB.. what does she mean...?

BILLIE stares frantically at BOB and CHARLEY.

              CHARLEY

Oh, I wouldn't worry about that...Just enjoy your time while you have it...

              BILLIE

          Enjoy what time CHARLEY??!!

CHARLEY looks around to the bushes.

             

BOB

CHARLEY? Yo.. you ain't gonna do anything stupid.. are you? CHAR?! Are you listening to me?!

              CHARLEY

I'm listening and all I'm hearing is rubbish... Just go, go live your lives toghether, have that happy ending that we was supposed to share! Not you and him! Just I don't want you to come running to me when he breaks your heart like his done mine....

Tears roll down CHARLEYS eyes.

              BOB

          I love you CHARLEY I really do...

              CHARLEY

It's just not enough anymore... You've made your bed, now lay in it. My presence is unwanted now and I'm not going to be here now for you to laugh at, leave me, I don't want to be here anymore....

              BILLIE

CHARLEY what do you mean you dont want to be here anymore?!? CHARLEY... It was a mistake trust me!

              CHARLEY

GO, leave me here! Leave me, go live your fantastic lives! You live and learn and I've learnt that even your closest friends will betray you and I just can't believe I've learnt it this way but you both mean nothing to me anymore, I can't believe I trusted you... Well now it's time for you to find out and know how I feel, to have your heart ripped out you like it was nothing, to know you have been betrayed in one of the worst possible ways by your bestfriend and and the person you thought you loved. Well goodbye and I hope you both rot!

CHARLEY turns and starts walking away..

              BILLIE

          Char...

             

BOB

          No, leave her, let her be...

BILLIE and CHARLEY cry knowing that there friendship has officially ended.

My Comment:
This is my finished version of the script about the Boyfriend cheating,  in this version I fixed my work by making it all allign unlike the other version (the uncompleted one) it looks alot more tidy and professional.

Script- the taxi ride

Ext.On a street in New York, America. Late Afternoon.

(Snowing)KIM pulls out her phone and texts her husband that she is finished shopping and is going to start to go home. She whistles for a taxi to come, the taxi pulls up next to her.

              KIM

          45, Anchor Avenue please...

              TAXI DRIVER (BILL)

          Sure hop in.

KIM places all her Christmas shopping into the taxi and sits in the back seat.

              TAXI DRIVER (BILL)

          So what’s a lady like you doing out on such a cold             afternoon?

              KIM

          Christmas shopping for the kids, this holiday seems to             be costing more and more!

KIM laughs and so does the TAXI DRIVER (BILL.)

              TAXI DRIVER (BILL)

          I know that feeling! The names BILL and yours?

              KIM

          Nice to meet you BILL, I’m KIM.

BILL smiles at KIM in the window. KIMS phone starts to ring. She answers.

KIM

          Hey, yeah I’m on my way home, I’m just at... Sorry             BILL where are we?

              BILL

          ..............

              KIM

          BILL? That was my turning?!

Muffled sound of the HUSBAND on the phone starting to yell...

              KIM

          BILL?!? Where are you taking me that was my turning!?!

BILL starts accelerating and turns down an deserted corner.

              KIM

          BILL, please your scaring me! Take me home please!

KIM starts to cry. The car stops, BILL reaches back and grabs the phone that KIM is clutching, but she won’t let go.

              BILL

          Give me the phone! NOW!     

KIM gives him the phone and he throws it out the window smashing it on the floor.

              KIM

          Why, why are you doing this! Please take me home my            kids they need me! My husband! Oh my husband he’ll be              so worried! He’ll call the police! Take me back now,             I’ll stop him... I promise! Please, take me back!              Please BILL! PLEASEEEE!

KIM at this point is sobbing. BILL just smiles and watches her through the mirror, just before speeding off again.

              KIM

          BILL..? BILL? Please take me home, it’s getting dark!

              BILL

          Shut up NOW!

My comment:
This work is not finished and is still a working process, I used all the rules like names in capitals and dialouge and actions alligned but this doesn't show on the blog because of problems which I don't know however Sir knows about this...
Working process....

Script Boyfriend Cheating

Ext.Bus stop.Morning.

CHARLEY sits at the bus stop and watches the cars go by. BILLIE sits down beside her and sighs before beginning to talk.

               BILLIE

          You know were really close friends and...

               CHARLEY

          And...?

               BILLIE

Well... Okay... Let’s say you know something about someone and that someone happens to be something very important to one of your best friends, what would you do would you tell the person and risk breaking their heart or would you keep quiet and hope the situation dies down and goes away...

CHARLEY looks at BILLIE confusingly but still doesn’t get what BILLIE is trying to say.

               CHARLEY

          BILLIE are you trying to tell me something?

               BILLIE

          No, well ermm... No.   

CHARLEY looks at BILLIE suspiciously.

               CHARLEY

          You know you can tell me if there is?

BILLIE thinks about things for a minute before starting to talk.

              BILLIE

          You know at the party yesterday when you fell asleep               on the sofa...

             

              CHARLEY

          Yeah...

              BILLIE

          Well, I was drunk and this other person was drunk and

          Well we started talking and kissed.....

CHARLEY smiled, not realising what she means by that.

              CHARLEY

          Awww BILL, so who is this mystery guy?

BILLIE looks to the floor.

              BILLIE

          Well I truly didn’t realise who I was talking to until         after it had happened and you know I would never do            anything like this, it was purely because I was drunk.             Promise you won’t get angry promise.

CHARLEY frowns, starting to put two and two together and stares straight into BILLIES eyes

              Charley

          Spit it out, who was it.

              BILLIE

          It was...

BILLIE looks to the floor again and tears begin to fall down her face.

              BILLIE

          It was...BOB

CHARLEY looks at BILLIE and slaps her straight across the face.

             

CHARLEY

          You...YOU traitor! I thought we were friends but all              along you have been behind my back going out with my                 boyfriend! Whats wrong can’t find a boyfriend for              yourself so you have to take mine!

BILLIE holding her face after the shock of the slap.

              BILLIE

          It was never like that CHARLEY, never it was intended.             It just sort of happened, really trust me.

              CHARLEY

           I will never trust you again never, friend...                 You will never ever again be no friend of mine!

CHARLEY takes out phone and begins to dial a number.

              BILLIE

          Who are you calling?!

              CHARLEY

Not that it’s any of your business, but I’m calling BOB. I think it’s time we see what really happened that night, when you and him went behind my back...and to think I ever trusted you, to think I used to trust you with everything and used to call you my BESTFRIEND!

CHARLEY begins to talk on mobile.

              CHARLEY

          Hello, we need to meet now! No this can’t be sorted on         phone! Come now. Bye.

BILLIE stares at CHARLEY.

              CHARLEY

          What you looking at. Come with me.

             

              BILLIE

          Where we going?

CHARLEY ignores BILLIE.

              BILLIE

          I said where we going?!

CHARLEY continues to ignore BILLIE and sticks her hand out for the bus.

EXT. Park. Morning.

CHARLEY looks around before seeing BOB sitting on a bench in an empty side of the park.

               CHARLEY

          Come, now.

CHARLEY and BILLIE walk towards BOB.

              BOB

          Hey girls, how can I be of assistance?

BILLIE looks down.

              CHARLEY

          Oh, I just thought that you wanted to have a chat with             your girlfriend...

BOB signals for CHARLEY to come and sit with him.

              CHARLEY

          Not me... Her.

CHARLEY pushes BILLIE down to sit with BOB.

              CHARLEY

          Oh look what an happy couple.

BOB looks at CHARLEY confusingly.

              BOB

          What are you on about CHARLEY, your my girlfriend! You         know that, what makes you think that she’s my                  girlfriend!?

BILLIE gives BOB an evil glance.

              BILLIE

          Actually the girl your calling SHE has a name!

              CHARLEY

          Shut up, both of you! I know your little secret from               the party! How could you do this to me BOB! I thought              you loved me!

              BOB

          CHARLEY you know it was never supposed to happen it            was an drunken moment, an accident! I love you CHARLEY        and wouldn’t ever do this to you! It just happened            char believe me.


My comment:
My work is unfinished at this momment, but think I done well to keep to the rules like names in capitals and allignment even though on this Blog it doesn't come up like it does on the actual word process (However, sir knows about this.) Working process....